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Pokemon X + Y Girl by theworldisbehindus Pokemon X + Y Girl by theworldisbehindus
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Just the female trainer from the upcoming Pokemon games. Can't wait for it to be released! :la:
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The Asatruar Critic here, time for a Critique!

I must say, my hope is a bit renewed for the series, partially because they might finally have the female characters not look strange. As far as your deviation goes, I like it quite a bit.

The Lines are clean, and the lighting is great. The background is also very nice as well, and the detail on her clothing is very pleasing. It's great to see someone that cares about those things.

I have only one grievance with this, and it lies with her chin. To me, it looks just a little... odd. Maybe it is due to it being a little pointy. But, regardless, it is really the only discrepancy on display. Bravo!

Now, for your Devious Rating!

Vision: This is a drawing of the new female trainer from the upcoming Pokemon X & Y versions. Not a terribly original concept, but it is pulled off rather nicely.

Originality: As a fan-art, it seems fairly standard. But that is not a bad thing at all, especially since it is done rather well. ^_^

Technique: I, unfortunately, had to dock you a small bit due to her chin. The rest, including those great leaves, is top-notch. Stellar work.

Impact: I am actually quite happy to see that the new female lead doesn't look entirely like she fell into a closet, and then climbed out again. Awesome job showing us what they will look like! ^_^

This is a Critique from The Asatru Critic, aka *MabusTheDark. If you have any questions about any part of this evaluation, do not hesitate to send me a Note, or comment on my page!
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Celairen Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a very cute and lovely work. I like mostly the lightning and coloring! Mostly at her dress and at her skin. There are little mistakes. For example her left Hand, mostly the fingers, are a bit small and thin.
But I like the happy feeling of it.
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CourtneyLynnWashburn Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Filmographer
Oh my i love this drawing. The girl is adorable! I love love love the hair and how you have it blowing its so cute the hair tie is at the end. I really like everything about this piece:heart:
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theworldisbehindus Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much :D
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CourtneyLynnWashburn Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Filmographer
Your welcome:love:
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I-rE-nA-216 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
nice your really good with colors!! :D
one thing though that is bothering me is her arms, make them longer in a sense... Ive got a migraine right now so gahhh... *shot*

but srsly good with colors!
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theworldisbehindus Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah now that I really look at it I realize that her left arm is too short . . . I'm bad at proportions :dead: I just have to keep practicing so I don't make amateur mistakes like that I guess . . .

But anyway thanks for your comment, I tried hard to make the colours look good at least :D
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I-rE-nA-216 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
haha we all do, practice makes perfect!!

and no prob!! :D
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I sincerely hope I was of assistance.
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theworldisbehindus Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm so tired right now I don't even know if I can write coherently but yes I appreciate it :)
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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